{"id":164,"date":"2016-12-31T03:58:51","date_gmt":"2016-12-31T03:58:51","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga102\/?page_id=164"},"modified":"2016-12-31T03:58:51","modified_gmt":"2016-12-31T03:58:51","slug":"the-importance-of-key-words","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga102\/learning-pathways\/building-strong-arguments\/the-importance-of-key-words\/","title":{"rendered":"The importance of key words"},"content":{"rendered":"
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Before going any further, read “Word Choice”<\/a><\/b> produced by The University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill Writing Center, from the English Composition I<\/a><\/b> course available from Saylor Academy<\/a><\/b>.\n<\/p>\n

Building clear thesis statements<\/b>\n<\/p>\n

Writing clear sentences is important throughout your writing. For the purposes of this handout, let\u2019s focus on the thesis statement\u2014one of the most important sentences in academic argument papers. You can apply these ideas to other sentences in your papers.\n<\/p>\n

A common problem with writing good thesis statements is finding the words that best capture both the important elements and the significance of the essay\u2019s argument. It is not always easy to condense several paragraphs or several pages into concise key terms that, when combined in one sentence, can effectively describe the argument.\n<\/p>\n

However, taking the time to find the right words offers writers a significant edge. Concise and appropriate terms will help both the writer and the reader keep track of what the essay will show and how it will show it. Graders, in particular, like to see clearly stated thesis statements. (For more on thesis statements in general, please refer to our handout.)\n<\/p>\n

Example:<\/b> You\u2019ve been assigned to write an essay that contrasts the river and shore scenes in Mark Twain\u2019s Huckleberry Finn. You work on it for several days, producing three versions of your thesis:\n<\/p>\n

Version 1<\/b>: There are many important river and shore scenes in Huckleberry Finn.\n<\/p>\n

Version 2<\/b>: The contrasting river and shore scenes in Huckleberry Finn suggest a return to nature.\n<\/p>\n

Version 3<\/b>: Through its contrasting river and shore scenes, Twain\u2019s Huckleberry Finn suggests that to find the true expression of American democratic ideals, one must leave \u201ccivilized\u201d society and go back to nature.\n<\/p>\n

Let\u2019s consider the word choice issues in these statements. In Version 1, the word \u201cimportant\u201d\u2014like \u201cinteresting\u201d\u2014is both overused and vague; it suggests that the author has an opinion but gives very little indication about the framework of that opinion. As a result, your reader knows only that you\u2019re going to talk about river and shore scenes, but not what you\u2019re going to say. Version 2 is an improvement: the words \u201creturn to nature\u201d give your reader a better idea where the paper is headed. On the other hand, she still does not know how this return to nature is crucial to your understanding of the novel.\n<\/p>\n

Finally, you come up with Version 3, which is a stronger thesis because it offers a sophisticated argument and the key terms used to make this argument are clear. At least three key terms or concepts are evident: the contrast between river and shore scenes, a return to nature, and American democratic ideals.\n<\/p>\n

By itself, a key term is merely a topic\u2014an element of the argument but not the argument itself. The argument, then, becomes clear to the reader through the way in which you combine key terms.\n<\/p>\n

Now that you have read this article, prepare a blog post of approximately 400 words where you use your own experience and the knowledge you acquired from the readings in the previous sections to answer the following:\n<\/p>\n

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  1. What words to you think you can add or remove from your own thesis statement to make it better?\n<\/li>\n
  2. Focus on the examples above, explain how how you think the examples get better. Do you think you can use this process to make your own thesis statement better?\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

    Remember to tag (WordPress) or label (Blogger) your blog post using the course tag: What is academic writing?\/enga102\/tag<\/a><\/i>\n<\/p>\n

    Note that you can also record your reflections in a written journal, if you prefer, but sharing your insights with your classmates means that you can trigger a discussion that may lead to a deeper understanding as we can all benefit from each others experience.\n<\/p>\n

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