{"id":240,"date":"2016-12-31T04:03:16","date_gmt":"2016-12-31T04:03:16","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/?page_id=240"},"modified":"2016-12-31T04:03:16","modified_gmt":"2016-12-31T04:03:16","slug":"start-editing-sentences-and-introducing-parallelism-challenge","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/learning-pathways\/polishing-your-sentences\/start-editing-sentences-and-introducing-parallelism-challenge\/","title":{"rendered":"Start &#8211; Editing sentences and introducing parallelism challenge"},"content":{"rendered":"<div id=\"content\" class=\"mw-body container\" role=\"main\">\n<div class=\"row\">\n<div class=\"col-md-12\">\n<div class=\"panel\">\n<div class=\"panel-body\">\n<div id=\"bodyContent\">\n<div id=\"mw-content-text\" lang=\"en\" dir=\"ltr\" class=\"mw-content-ltr\">\n<p>\n<\/p>\n<div class=\"panel iDevice\">\n\t<div class=\"panel-heading idevice-heading\">\n\t\t<div>\n\t\t\t<img decoding=\"async\" class=\"pedagogicalicon\" alt=\"summary\" src=\"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-content\/themes\/oeru_course\/idevices\/Icon_summary.png\">\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<div>\n\t\t\t<h2>Challenge summary<\/h2>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\t<div class=\"panel-body\">\n\t\t<div class=\"col-md-12\">\n\t\t\t<\/p>\n<table>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td width=\"100px\"><b>Summary<\/b>:<\/td>\n<td>Editing sentences and learning about parallellism<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td>\n<div class=\"floatleft\"><a href=\"http:\/\/WikiEducator.org\/File:Time7.svg\" class=\"image\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" alt=\"Time7.svg\" src=\"\/\/WikiEducator.org\/images\/thumb\/8\/88\/Time7.svg\/30px-Time7.svg.png\" width=\"30\" height=\"30\" class=\"img-responsive\"><\/a><\/div>\n<\/td>\n<td>1 &#8211; 2 hours<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td>\n<div class=\"floatleft\"><a href=\"http:\/\/WikiEducator.org\/File:Font2.svg\" class=\"image\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" alt=\"Font2.svg\" src=\"\/\/WikiEducator.org\/images\/thumb\/e\/e5\/Font2.svg\/30px-Font2.svg.png\" width=\"30\" height=\"30\" class=\"img-responsive\"><\/a><\/div>\n<\/td>\n<td>Linked to assessment<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>Time to edit your sentences and learn the benefits of parallel structure.\n<\/p>\n<p>\n<\/p>\n<p>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>\n<\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"mw-headline\" id=\"Start_here\">Start here<\/span><\/h2>\n<div class=\"panel iDevice\">\n\t<div class=\"panel-heading idevice-heading\">\n\t\t<div>\n\t\t\t<img decoding=\"async\" class=\"pedagogicalicon\" alt=\"web resources\" src=\"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-content\/themes\/oeru_course\/idevices\/Icon_inter.png\">\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<div>\n\t\t\t<h2>Stimulus resources<\/h2>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\t<div class=\"panel-body\">\n\t\t<div class=\"col-md-12\">\n\t\t\t<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li> Lessons learned from the <a href=\"\/enga104\/learning-pathways\/polishing-your-sentences\/shaping-up-your-sentences\" title=\"Revising and polishing your writing\/ENGA104\/Polishing your sentences\/Microblog\">microblog activity<\/a>.\n<\/li>\n<li> Knowledge acquired through your reading of <b>Sections 2.1 to 2.7 <\/b>from the <b><a rel=\"nofollow\" class=\"external text\" href=\"https:\/\/saylordotorg.github.io\/text_writing-for-success\/index.html\">Writing for success<\/a><\/b> course.\n<\/li>\n<li> Knowledge acquired through your reading of <b><a rel=\"nofollow\" class=\"external text\" href=\"https:\/\/saylordotorg.github.io\/text_writing-for-success\/s07-punctuation.html\">Chapter 3<\/a><\/b> from the <b><a rel=\"nofollow\" class=\"external text\" href=\"https:\/\/saylordotorg.github.io\/text_writing-for-success\/index.html\">Writing for success<\/a><\/b> course.\n<\/li>\n<li> Knowledge acquired through your reading of <b><a rel=\"nofollow\" class=\"external text\" href=\"https:\/\/saylordotorg.github.io\/text_handbook-for-writers\/s20-04-using-parallelism.html\">Section 16.4<\/a><\/b> from the <b><a rel=\"nofollow\" class=\"external text\" href=\"https:\/\/saylordotorg.github.io\/text_handbook-for-writers\/index.html\">Handbook for writers<\/a><\/b> course.\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>\n<\/p>\n<p>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>\n<\/p>\n<div class=\"panel iDevice\">\n\t<div class=\"panel-heading idevice-heading\">\n\t\t<div>\n\t\t\t<img decoding=\"async\" class=\"pedagogicalicon\" alt=\"objectives\" src=\"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-content\/themes\/oeru_course\/idevices\/Icon_objectives.png\">\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<div>\n\t\t\t<h2>Purpose<\/h2>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\t<div class=\"panel-body\">\n\t\t<div class=\"col-md-12\">\n\t\t\t<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s time to edit your essay again but this time the focus will be on sentence structure and punctuation. One way to improve your sentence structure is to use parallelism, which means giving equal weight to similar phrases or clauses that share the same grammatical structure. The purpose of this learning challenge is to:\n<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li> Introduce you to parallelism.\n<\/li>\n<li> Improve the impact of your essay by ensuring your sentences are properly constructed.\n<\/li>\n<li> Help you learn how to use parallelism.\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\n<\/p>\n<p>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p><!-- \nNewPP limit report\nCPU time usage: 0.044 seconds\nReal time usage: 0.047 seconds\nPreprocessor visited node count: 372\/1000000\nPreprocessor generated node count: 1157\/1000000\nPost\u2010expand include size: 9190\/2097152 bytes\nTemplate argument size: 3834\/2097152 bytes\nHighest expansion depth: 8\/40\nExpensive parser function count: 0\/100\n--><\/p>\n<p><!-- Saved in parser cache with key wikiedu-mw_:pcache:idhash:180182-0!*!0!*!*!2!* and timestamp 20161231023312 and revision id 1021384\n -->\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"visualClear\"><\/div>\n<\/p><\/div>\n<\/p><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"row\">\n<div class=\"col-md-12\">\n<ul class=\"pager\">\n<li class=\"previous\">\n            <a href=\"\/enga104\/learning-pathways\/polishing-your-sentences\/required-reading\">\u2190 Previous<\/a>\n          <\/li>\n<li class=\"next\">\n            <a href=\"\/enga104\/learning-pathways\/polishing-your-sentences\/tasks-editing-sentences-and-introducing-parallelism-challenge\">Next \u2192<\/a>\n          <\/li>\n<\/ul><\/div>\n<\/p><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<footer>\n<br \/>\n<\/footer>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Start here \u2190 Previous Next \u2192<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"parent":230,"menu_order":3600,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-240","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/240","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=240"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/240\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":241,"href":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/240\/revisions\/241"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/230"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/course.oeru.org\/enga104\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=240"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}